Situated among the clouds
A desperate escape
From oppressive vibes
Courtesy of buildings
Towering sky high
Harsh lights illuminate
Individualism down below
And across the street
Unpleasant contrast
Too severe to be pretty
I’ll leave a light on for you
A source of comfort and warmth
In an increasingly
Cold and merciless world
Written for Reena’s Xploration Challenge #306
Heartbreakingly beautiful poem, Claudia! The gesture of leaving a light on, when individualism is highlighted in the streets is so difficult to find.
Thanks for joining in!
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Thank you so much, Reena, I truly appreciate your kind feedback. Participating in this fun picture prompt was my pleasure entirely. Thanks for allowing me to join in! 💚
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Beautifully written Claudia
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Thanks very kindly, Sadje! Enjoy your weekend 💚
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You’re welcome! You too.
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A light giving us hope, beautiful.
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it.
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❤️
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That third stanza should be gilded in gold. A porch light left on at home to say “here, come into the warmth.”
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Hi Debi,
Thanks very kindly for your visit to my blog and your feedback, it is truly appreciated. Enjoy your day.
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So beautiful poem, Claudia.
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Thank you, Indira.
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My pleasure, dear.
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